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01 March 2006 @ 10:51 pm
Poster Meditation (Asian Grass)  
*this poem was recently rejected just like the other i posted--same submission*
COMMENTS MUCH APPRECIATED, please critique!


Poster Meditation
(Asian Grass)





Wisp thin rasps against the heart of the
bloodround
perfectred
rising sun

wailing through the millenia to the shogun philosopher kings
sobbing downward with the swish of giving up

the perfection
of careful ricepaper and seaweed
wrapped hard-earned suppers
cry out
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